2 original short stories with biblical themes
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betapleaseFandom: Original (The Lover of Lilith)
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Explicit; since this story is based on the myth of Lilith and the portrayal of Mary in the Bible, religious themes are unavoidable; first time sex and also magical F/F impregnation (not futa).
Estimated Fic Length: 6K
Notes: This short story is for a submission call. I already have an editor looking at it, but I could use a second pair of eyes. I'm ESL and while some of my Danglish (Danish-English) is intentional, some of it is not, and I could really use some help weeding out the latter. I could also use a more trained smut gaze than my own on the sex parts. I use a deliberately flowery language, but I still want it to read as "proper" smut and could use help there.
Fandom: Original (No Room In the Inn)
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Mature; portrayal of pregnancy and childbirth; coming out-metaphors and a general allegory for LGBT+-people getting thrown out by parental figures.
Estimated Fic Length: 1500-ish words
Notes: Same as above, minus the submission call and sex parts.
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Explicit; since this story is based on the myth of Lilith and the portrayal of Mary in the Bible, religious themes are unavoidable; first time sex and also magical F/F impregnation (not futa).
Estimated Fic Length: 6K
Notes: This short story is for a submission call. I already have an editor looking at it, but I could use a second pair of eyes. I'm ESL and while some of my Danglish (Danish-English) is intentional, some of it is not, and I could really use some help weeding out the latter. I could also use a more trained smut gaze than my own on the sex parts. I use a deliberately flowery language, but I still want it to read as "proper" smut and could use help there.
Fandom: Original (No Room In the Inn)
Characters/Pairings: (Virgin) Mary/Lilith
Rating & Warnings: Mature; portrayal of pregnancy and childbirth; coming out-metaphors and a general allegory for LGBT+-people getting thrown out by parental figures.
Estimated Fic Length: 1500-ish words
Notes: Same as above, minus the submission call and sex parts.
#151 - Obstruse
Jun. 8th, 2025 05:48 pmmxcatmoon posting in vocab_drabblesThis week's word is
[əbˈstro͞os]
adjective
Difficult to understand; obscure. Concepts or ideas that are hard to understand due to their complexity or obscurity.
"An abstruse philosophical inquiry."
Obstruse
[əbˈstro͞os]
adjective
Difficult to understand; obscure. Concepts or ideas that are hard to understand due to their complexity or obscurity.
"An abstruse philosophical inquiry."
Looking for future betas and looking to help people with original works
Jun. 8th, 2025 10:38 amgrimmrow posting in betapleaseLooking for Betas
Fandom: Original Work
Characters/Pairings: Het pairings so far, but it's only book one at this time.
Rating & Warnings: Cursing, blood, torture, and such like that. Supernatural creatures, has teens but it's an adult book. Actually without the cursing it could be a gen work. I don't focus too much on romance but instead friendships. Later installments will have romance however.
Estimated Fic Length: 40,000 to 80,000 words.
Notes: The fanfic isn't fully written yet. I did a rough outline so I can write the full work in a little bit. I'm just getting two or three people to become part of my life in the mean time, so I can shower with virtual hugs and kisses for helping me. It's Buffy the Vampire slayer inspired.
Looking to beta!
Fandoms: Original works, final fantasy, resident evil, silent hill, buffy the vampire slayer, the vampire diaries, supernatural (yes, please)
Strengths: I'm good at catching errors, mistakes, even sentence structure mishaps.
Limits: I'll beta anything except underage.
Other Notes: Nothing to say. Give me a reason to get back into reading more often.
Fandom: Original Work
Characters/Pairings: Het pairings so far, but it's only book one at this time.
Rating & Warnings: Cursing, blood, torture, and such like that. Supernatural creatures, has teens but it's an adult book. Actually without the cursing it could be a gen work. I don't focus too much on romance but instead friendships. Later installments will have romance however.
Estimated Fic Length: 40,000 to 80,000 words.
Notes: The fanfic isn't fully written yet. I did a rough outline so I can write the full work in a little bit. I'm just getting two or three people to become part of my life in the mean time, so I can shower with virtual hugs and kisses for helping me. It's Buffy the Vampire slayer inspired.
Looking to beta!
Fandoms: Original works, final fantasy, resident evil, silent hill, buffy the vampire slayer, the vampire diaries, supernatural (yes, please)
Strengths: I'm good at catching errors, mistakes, even sentence structure mishaps.
Limits: I'll beta anything except underage.
Other Notes: Nothing to say. Give me a reason to get back into reading more often.